Hi bloggers
This week I have been working on a story with my friends and it was very fun to make this story and we tried are trying to include figurative language like boom crash bang so mabey you can put in some figurative language and I hope you like it and it is still a work in progress so here it is
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I really liked your story i liked when they said he was gonna play the monster truck with his friends but he had no friends it made me giggle i think you could have added a little more to your story
ReplyDeleteHi Luke nice story it was realy cool and funny i loved how you said (i mean his imaginary friends) that made me laugh. maby next time you could put the title at the top of the story other than that it was great:)
ReplyDeleteHi luke i loved your story about the mcdonalds monster truck it was funny how his amagerny friends hated the line :)
ReplyDeleteHi Luke your story was super good and funny when he said he was talking to his imaginary friends it made me laugh a lot. i think next time you should add some more but i loved it.
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