HI, blogger this week I have been working on a story for free writing I would love to do more on it with my friends and it was very fun it took a long time I hope you like it so here it is
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HI Luke whats up i liked the story about Mcdonalds it is a pretty good fast food shop.it is a really good story maybe you could add more pictures to make it more interesting
ReplyDeleteHi luke
ReplyDeletei think it was great and i have made a story before.the way you presented the story i could bearly read it so that could be a work on
Hi luke
ReplyDeletei really like the story it was super interesting
i think you should have write a little more in the introduction.
but overall i loved it